[Eracer]

You're getting advice from the real pros here, which is a great thing. I'm no pro, but I do want to add some comments. First, I think your swing looks pretty good for only having played for a year and eight months. But we definitely need some footage of you hitting balls. Watching practice swings is practically useless. Finally, it looks to me you first need to work on developing a more athletic posture. You stand very tall, which contributes to your upright swing. Think of yourself as a second-baseman - knees flexed, back straight, bent from the hips. Get down and over the ball a bit more.

Looks pretty good! Work on what the pros told you about maintaining some lag in the downswing, and you'll be a pro in no time!